Monday, September 17, 2012

Contents of the Dead man's pocket

But still he didn't begin his work. He crossed the room to the hallway entrance and, leaning against the doorjamb, hands shoved into his back pockets again, he called, "Clare?" When his wife answered, he said, "Sure you don't mind going alone?"

4 comments:

  1. I think this foreshadows the conflict between himself and I think this is what pushes on the story.

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  2. He wants to work but he also wants to go with his wife.

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  4. There's gonna be a conflict pushing on the story later, which is gonna be interesting~

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